Friday, February 8, 2013

Thesis Paragraph

One in eight women in the United States will be diagnosed with Breast cancer in their lifetime. It is the most commonly diagnosed cancer in women. 220,000 is the estimated number of women that will be diagnosed each year and over 40,000 will die. Over the years much research has been conducted of how to prevent and cure this disease. Though there has not been a breakthrough for a cure quite yet, studies have  shown ways in which women can be prevented and knowledgable ahead of time if they are at risk in getting breast cancer. Different developments in technology, new medicines, and advanced therapy are all key factors in the future of preventing/helping patients with breast cancer.

1 comment:

  1. This will be important work for people to hear the results of.

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